CET46 Composition Promotion

CET4/6 Composition Promotion

在上一篇文章https://blog.csdn.net/weixin_45812669/article/details/109195100中介紹了一些關于寫作文的小技巧，也就是標準的應試“八股文”，但要寫出一篇優秀的作文光靠生硬的照搬和銜接是完全不夠的，你是否還在寫通篇簡單句呢？好的長句才是要寫出高分作文的精髓，因此，在本文中，小編將針對寫作中的長句寫法進行介紹，希望對大家提升寫作有幫助！

Tip 1：

名詞 + 修飾成分（who/which/that構成定語從句），也就是我們常說的限制性定語從句，

who/which/that代替前面的名詞在定語充當主語或賓語，

e.g.1 Chinese students who have been learning English for over a decade still cannot/fail to/hardly communicate with foreigners naturally.

e.g.2 The university ranking system which have been carried out / practiced for long has aroused hot / heated / wide debate among/of the public.

e.g.3 A mounting / growing number of digital products which greatly satisfy people’s spiritual demand are more likely to grow in popularity.

Tip 2：

主語 + 謂語 + 賓語，which句子，也就是我們常說的非限制性定語從句，

即對前面的句子補充說明，

e.g.1 Excessive surfing online does harm to our body and mind,which is agreed by majority of parents.

相信大家這個是用的最多的，也是最容易上手寫的，小栗子就不舉那么多啦，

Tip 3：

名詞 + 修飾成分（V-ed，V-ing，to do短語）非謂語短語作后置定語，

這個技巧真的墻裂推薦大家要掌握并要用起來鴨！！超級加分強調，幾乎所有我上過課的老師都在為它打call，

舉個栗子對比一下，

e.g.1 謀殺了總統的人被判了死刑，

• The man who murdered the president was sentenced to death.
• The man having murdered the president was sentenced to death.

針對having murdered 解釋：有朋友肯定有疑惑，having + 過去分詞，是不能作后置定語的，而這里為什么這樣用呢？這里的having完成式強調的是分詞動作發生在謂語動作之前，謀殺是在宣判死刑前已經成立，已經發生了，

e.g.2 The lucky number recognized by majority of (別再用many,most) people normally / generally(別再用usually) associated with / related to / tied to / linked to(與…相關) fortune and career.

e.g.3 E-books favored by most of young people are becoming popular.

Tip 4：

并列賓語從句，主語 + that 從句1 + that 從句2 +that 從句3，表達一類人對于主題的類似看法，

這個技巧很明顯在寫論述文時非常加分，比如要寫一些人認為上網有好處，上網的優缺點，類似這種文章，相信大家和我一樣，還在寫這些人認為有上網有好處1，認為有好處2這樣的簡單句構成，而其實這可以通過一句話就搞定，舉個栗子，

e.g.1 Teenagers maintain / assume / hold the view / consider (千萬別再用think啦！) that Internet has been providing diverse / various(替換 many，a lot of ) ways to obtaining(換掉get) information related to everyone’s study and career,that they can make more new friends through millions of websites,even their soul mates for life; that a variety of daily necessities are easily purchased(替換buy) online, which they value most.

Tip 5：

非謂語（V-ed / V-ing / to do ) 成分，主語 + 謂語 + 賓語

e.g.1 Greatly impacted by Star War, he decides /determined to devote / commit himself to the production of sci-fi flim.

e.g.2 Faced with gradual global warming, we must take immediate action to protect the environment.

e.g.3 To secure / obtain a prior position/status,most of universities are inclined to adopt some positive ways.

Tip 6：

形式主語：

It is/was +adj/V-ed that句子

e.g.1 It must be admitted that modern lifestyle has been impacted to Internet.

Tip 7：

同位語從句，對前面補充說明

一般跟在很有標志性的名詞后面，一般由whether 和that 引導，通常that 不能省略，

標志性名詞：

hope,fact,answer,problem…

注意如demand，wish，suggestion，resolution燈某些名詞后面的同位語從句要用虛擬語氣，

e.g.1 They expressed the wish that she accept the award.

e.g.2 We draw a conclusion that it is unwise to overuse the game pad.

e.g.3 He referred to Copernicus’s statement that earth moves round the sun.

Tip 8：

強調句型

It is/was + 被強調部分 +that / who +其他部分

注：即使被強調部分為狀語，也只能用that,而不能用when, where,how,why…

e.g.1 It was Lily that I met at the railway station yesterday.

e.g.2 It was not until his wife came back that he went to bed.

一般在寫作時，如果我要想強調某物的重要性的時候，就會想到使用強調句句型，

Tip 9：

倒裝句

倒裝句又分為全部倒裝和部分倒裝，并且Only,not only…but also,hardly / scarcely…when…No sooner…than…和表否定含義的詞（no,not,never,seldom,little,hardly,at no time,in no way,not until)放在句首要部分倒裝,as,though引導倒裝句,so…that句型So 位于句首倒裝，虛擬語氣中were,had,should移到主語前省略if部分倒裝，

由于這種技巧使用時容易出錯，畫蛇添足，所有建議大家在沒有把握的時候，就不寫，

不過也可以記住一些常見實用的記憶性倒裝句，

比如 Only in this way, can we learn English well.

作文板塊就介紹到這里啦！如何將文章寫的通順連貫又不失可讀性，其實主要要寫好作文還是要靠練滴，練作文都話，推薦大家可以上批改網練習，另外，多看優秀的作文學習，并且有意識的要用想寫下的詞可不可以替換成另一個高級的詞匯或短語，修飾好你的文章，

That is all in term of composition ,thanks for reading !